“We use the haircut. So here's a wife cutting her husband's hair. You can see both of their faces and see what they're saying as the viewer. But the two characters don't see each other's face because one is behind the other asking questions”

Freelance Writing Direct with Estelle · #216 Adapting Life to Page to Screenplay with William Dameron

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Use a haircut scene where one character cuts another's hair to show subtext through facial expressions while dialogue carries the meaning

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